Flagrant Emotions: Tales of Relationships
Something happened
Something happened
I did it
She did it
I really want to do it for the longest time
It came out of nowhere
I told the truth
She created lies
She was becoming a monster
She felt threatened, she's the monster
It was for her own good,
She was wrong, right?
One of these days someone would have done it
No. I did nothing wrong.
I did her a favor
Was I was the problem?
Was I was the problem?
I've done something good
I did everything wrong
I can finally live now
I don't think I can live with myself now
I let him go
She walked away
I wish I hadn't
I can't believe she did
I couldn’t look back
She didn't even look back
I was scared of the feelings
I thought she felt something
I couldn't face the humiliation
She couldn't put herself out
I wanted to make him happy
She wanted to see me suffer
I can't feel anything
I can feel everything
I saw them
He stood there
I wanted to move
He didn't move
All I could do is watch
He couldn't get enough
It was too late
He didn't even try
I wanted to say something
He just opened his mouth
No words in the world could change anything
No words
No Silence
Then Silence
I really liked the repetition in this poem as it added a lot to it. I think that my favorite line was "no words in the world could change anything" which is just so impactful.
ReplyDeleteI really likes how you contrasted the two perspectives in this poem by having two voices as opposites. Having two point of views made it a lot deeper. Really good job!
ReplyDeleteI really like the style of this poem. How there is a positive answer where you would feel good about yourself . Then a negative question where you would question yourself on something you think you have done wrong.
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