He stands,
facing a rope
that stretches under the rising sun,
and past a ruthless waterfall
that dares him to try and cross.
He tries not to look down
at the rushing water below,
All he can hear is its deafening roar.
He takes a step.
The rope gives slightly,
audaciously.
The tendrils bite into his feet.
He reconsiders for a second,
but follows his foot
with another.
And he takes another step, and another.
But, sure enough,
he slips
and crashes into the depths.
It takes him an eternity to come back.
He struggles for breath,
and he tries again,
and he falls off again,
and he comes back again.
And the days pass by,
But finally,
battered, and bruised, and bloodied,
he balances,
crossing the moonlit sky
to the other side
I really enjoy the simplicity of this poem. It delivers the message in a very quaint and clear manner and it overall feels nice to read. My favorite line is "and a ruthless waterfall that taunts him to try and cross".
ReplyDeleteI liked the repetition in the fourth stanza because it shows his perseverance. My favorite line is "battered, and bruised, and bloodied" because of the alliteration and imagery.
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