Freedom
teenagers lack freedom
teenagers crave independence
they desire the ability to make their own decisions and choices
teenagers lack opportunity
teenagers crave ability
when hindered they become frustrated
frustration follows people around and is impossible to dismiss
lack of independence is frustrating
lack of opportunity is frustrating
the ability to drive
not having to rely on others for your needs
this grants a release of frustration
gives a sense of freedom
gives a sense of opportunity
this is desired by teenagers
this exemption is however limited
limited by youth
youth is a limitation on the freedom and opportunity teenagers lust
age is a limitation on the ambitions of the common teen
a release of frustration is what teenagers lack and crave 
1) repetition is an effective device in your poem
ReplyDelete2)"a release of frustration is what teenagers lack and crave" is my favorite line
I like the repetition you use in your poem to emphasis your message. My favorite use of this was in the two lines "lack of independence is frustrating,
ReplyDeletelack of opportunity is frustrating".
I really like your repetition and the overall imagery in this poem!
ReplyDeleteThe sense of truth that the poem portrays is very interesting, and the repetition with similar lines helps emphasize similar aspects. My favorite line is "youth is a limitation on the freedom and opportunity teenagers lust". This poem is very relatable, which helps connect to the reader.
ReplyDeleteI like the use of repition in thus poem my favorite line was youth is a limitation on the freedom and opportunity teenagers lust this poem is very relatable.
ReplyDeleteI like the repetition that you use. It really drives your point home. I like the line: "lack of independence is frustrating / lack of opportunity is frustrating" because it is very relatable.
ReplyDeleteI like how you used the repetition of teenagers to show all the things teenagers want which really creates a reliability. My favorite line is "youth is a limitation on the freedom and opportunity teenagers lust" because it shows how people limit the things teenagers can do because they are still youthful.
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