Tao Poem
To Follow the Tao you must Let go.
The more control you have the less you gain.
The more you give the more you gain.
Tao is not given
But it is gained
To gain you must give
To more you try to secure yourself and others
The more you scare and frighten others
To follow the tao you must let loose
Do not control
Tao is all around us it's the only force
Those who know don't talk
Those who are blinded do
The more you give to other the more you have
Gained yourself.
I really like the flow of the poem, also has very clear inspiration from the Tao. Good Job!
ReplyDeleteI like the repetition of ' gain ' it really emphasizes the main idea :) .
ReplyDeleteI really like the message of this poem. I also think that the flow of it is really nice!
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